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Offline Timothias

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'The Jewel of the Empire': A History of Nuln, Part One
« on: April 12, 2013, 11:07:22 PM »
Nevermind.
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Re: 'The Jewel of the Empire': A History of Nuln, Part One
« Reply #1 on: April 12, 2013, 11:09:15 PM »
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Re: 'The Jewel of the Empire': A History of Nuln, Part One
« Reply #2 on: April 13, 2013, 12:13:02 AM »
Thanks SOF, link fixed.

Great write up too by the way, thank you for showing me! I will refer to it going forward.

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Re: 'The Jewel of the Empire': A History of Nuln, Part One
« Reply #3 on: April 16, 2013, 06:34:11 PM »
I will be writing a continuing series about my particular corner of the Old World - Nuln!

Plagiarism isn't writing though....

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But such ventures required sailing through Pirate's Current, up the Black Gulf, and then traveling overland for many leagues to eventually enter the Empire through Black Fire Pass.

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But such ventures required a dangerous voyage, sailing through Pirates Current, up the Black Gulf, and then traveling far over land, to eventually enter the Empire through Black Fire Pass.

Judiciously adding synonyms does not make these two sentences different. The problem of this method is that Nuln is a reasonably well written about place in Warhammer and if you want to give it your own spin and description based of compiling the source material, then you really need to form your own prose. Piecing together a bunch of other bits and sources through C&P followed by some editing doesn't work.
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Re: 'The Jewel of the Empire': A History of Nuln, Part One
« Reply #4 on: April 16, 2013, 07:27:18 PM »
OK thanks for the feedback.