So, very mobile command, lots of detachment work, and basically 4 blocks (Halb, GS, ICKs, Stank). This looks like a good build to me, I would like to see a HBVG in there, though. Do you see the general/captain/priests jumping from unit to unit? As for the mage, I would love to use light (Kinda burnt out on metal after the last one and, personally, I've used shadow much more than light.)
I hope this is not getting too ahead of ourselves, HHG! Don't mean to push, just really like plotting! Take as much time as you need!