well some critics then.

Mouldlines stay visible, no dipping will help there I am afraid.
Paint the colours between the lines. (look at the spearmen, red on his hand and red spilled over his spear...)
Before dipping paint the entire model. An unfinished model is after dipping still an unfinished model.
I like the effect of the dip on the white and red, if youre skills are that bad it sure is something you might exploit... but still although the end result may improve, it only does so if you finish youre models first.
So give it youre best shot, pick up a model remove the mouldlines, paint regimental colours, hands, face, shoes, armour, metal parts, wood, hair and then dip him. You have to hang in there and focus on the result, I am sure you can do it.

Show us a picture or two once you've finished the model
