This is the last version of the proposed alliance as written by Ostermarker (sorry for cut and paste couldn't figure out how to officially quote)
I believe it may be necessary to have the treaty retyped up here, I'm losing track. I think, as this is just basically an alliance with some extra stuff, go simple, let the fluff write the complicated bits, or GW.
As I see it is:
1. Alliance
1.1 This agreement shall remain in effect and adhered to by all parties until the date the campaign is brought to a close. After which time, officials from both sides may agree to extend this agreement. By official we mean: Imperial Elector Counts (including the Emperor) and Bretonnian Dukes (including the King)
1.2 Bretonnains shall avoid direct physical confrontation with any Imperial citizens, or mercenary under their employ, unless physically struck.
1.3 Any Imperial soldiers shall avoid direct physical confrontation with any Bretonnian, unless phuysically struck
2. Permission
2.1 A Bretonnian force may enter the Empire to attack the forces of evil,
2.2 If any member of a Bretonnian army breaks Imperial Law, he shall be treated as a civilian,
3. Military Fighting
3.1 As allies, Bretonnia and the Empire, shall, at all times, strive to help each other, and at the least avoid fighting one another. If neither is possible, after the battle, all surviving members of both armies shall aid in the burial of the dead. The leader of the aggressors must clean the sword of the leader of the defenders
3.2 A Bretonnian force may elect not to attack an army of High Elves, Wood Elves, Dwarfs, Lizardmen, if asked by an Imperial General, unless the General is defending or sallying,
3.3 An Imperial force may elect not to attack an army of High Elves, Wood Elves, Dwarfs, Lizardmen, if asked by a Bretonnian General, unless the General is defending or sallying,
3.4 A Bretonnian must avoid combat with our allies (which currently are: the Halflings of the Moot and the Nation of Kislev),
4. Land
4.1 Bretonnian nobles can take land without an owner on the condition they swear loyalty to the Elector Count (dual fiefs),
4.2 The Bretonnian noble may build defensive structures, as long as he is in agreement with the Elector Count and an Imperial Engineer on the specifications (height, depth, etc)
5. Marienburg And Its Surroundings
5.1 Bretonnia won't side with Marienburg if the Empire tries to attack an army in the Wasteland,
5.2 The Empire won't side with Marienburg if Bretonnia tries to attack an army in the Bitter Moors,
5.3 If Marienburg is taken by either of the two nations, it shall be split down the Reik.
Please vote on this proposal. I could not see how to post it as a poll so please limit your answers to "yay" - Supporting the alliance as stated or "Nay" - Rejecting the alliance as stated.
Thankyou
edit: if you do have any qusetions plese put them on the other thread, I want to try and keep this one as clear as possible.